The Salt Year
how to read the ratings
This scale comes from film-industry script coverage. We use it for every format, so here’s what each word means:
- Excellent
- A real strength. Protect it as you revise.
- Good
- Working, and could be sharper.
- Fair
- Holding the story back. Fix these first.
- Poor
- Needs rebuilding.
the verdict
- Not ready yet
- Major work needed before it goes out.
- Revise and resubmit
- Close. Make the fixes, then send it.
- Ready to submit
- Send it out.
Nora is the reason a reader keeps going.
Why it’s Excellent.She jokes when she’s most frightened, and it tells us who she is without a word of explaining. Protect that as you revise.
The islanders’ speech is written the way they talk. That’s a choice, so these notes leave it alone.
The story starts in chapter six.
“It wasn’t until the last ferry stopped running that Nora understood she would have to stay the winter.”
Why it matters.This is the book’s real first line of story. Everything before it is weather and backstory, and an agent’s reader will stop long before it.
What to try.Open nearer the ferry. Move what chapters one to five set up into Nora’s first week on the island, where each piece can cost her something.